Tuesday, March 11, 2014

The Web - Excerpt From My Upcoming Novel

Here is a short excerpt from my upcoming novel. Enjoy! 

 The Web

Tec was alone, not digitally, of course, for there were many other avatars around him, but mentally. The night of the party played over on the wall above the bar. He watched in muted silence as he found his precious CeCe on the patio.

Silence. He adored it. He lived in a world of constant noise, virtual and real. Whether it was the chattering of his employees and administrators or the static of the Web, there was always noise. Luckily for him, he could mute it all in his virtual reality.

Around him the avatars of people danced to digital music he couldn't hear and drank their virtual drinks, reveling in the surreal atmosphere of Tec's technological creations. Everything there was sleek and stylish bits of data, clean cut lines of code, and intoxicating information that he controlled. An intricate fabric of false realism.

It had become more popular than the real world, this digitized fantasy land full of partying and risque behavior. Explore other planets, fulfill your darkest sexual desires, or just party in one of the many preprogrammed clubs, sipping on viruses that hack your brain into thinking you're drunk. It's all possible, and it's all just a simple push of a button away.

But Tec wasn't in a festive mood. He didn't want to dance, he didn't want to drink. He just wanted to be alone, so he could think, in the sweet silence.

The large wallscreen above the bar showed Tec and CeCe talking. She looked remarkably unchanged by time. Maybe a little older, though it could have been the dress. And her glow, it was much dimmer than he recalled from the last time they saw each other.

But she was still beautiful, as beautiful as any little girl with eyes wide, ready to take on the world. He remembered the first time he saw her, in that dreadfully outdated showcase of technological evolution. He remembered the name, though his internal monologue pretended he didn't, as if it were far below him. The Great Exhibition.

There was no doubt about it, back then, when he was as young as she was, there was something truly enticing about her. She was fresh, like the first bloom of spring. Her shine was almost dizzying then. She had this unbelievable talent to sense the emotions around her, yet still she retained that youthful bliss of being untainted by it all.

She was an angel, back then. And though, at the time, Tec couldn't experience emotions like she could, when they touched there was a spark of sorts, a tingling kind of sensation that Tec had never encountered in his brief – by comparison – existence.

It wasn't exactly a feeling or an emotion, but just holding her hand or the soft touch of her lips, Tec felt it, more than he had felt anything before. It was a sensation, one that Tec had lived without yet the moment he experienced it he knew he would be chasing it for the rest of his life.

Her touch made him feel alive for the very first time.

It was the sort of alive he figured a living thing felt. It wasn't empty and cold like an unpowered machine. It was a full, vibrating, heavy, here-and-now sense that was truly remarkable.

As the wallscreen played, Tec watched Pride step into the frame. She was beautiful, he could not deny it. She stood opposite Innocence, tall and proud, the queen of the jungle that was New Europe; the mighty trees now towering skyscrapers, the rivers now multilaned roadways, the animals gone, replaced with people who barely cared for anything save for themselves. He watched her on the screen, reliving the night of the party through collective memories saved into this digital landscape he so meticulously created over hundreds of years. And as he watched the two converse, realizing the power behind the dark beauty that stood by his side, he soon forgot of the little girl that had been but a distant memory to him for so long. The girl named Innocence who he had once loved.

Once. Could love be rekindled? He wasn't sure love even existed for him. He had met her before, a long time ago, but Love is as fleeting as childhood. Had he ever truly been in love? Tec couldn't tell.

He watched Innocence leave. For a moment he felt a pinch of something in his chest. Like someone had plucked a string that vibrated and stung his heart. But it was gone before he could realize what it was.


Pride wrapped herself around him tighter. Even then, sitting in a virtual bar of his own making, watching the memory replay itself like a film, away from the rest of the Eternals and their sway, he could feel her, that power that was so intoxicating. Who needed love anyway? Love was for the young, the blind, the innocent. He didn't need anyone. He was Technology. He ruled the world.  

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